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    • I'm just a girl...who doesn't give up. I play piano and sing. Music is healing. My poems are to let people know that there is such a thing as Soulmates, and true love, even if lost..is very rare but it really does exist.

      I never stopped loving you..and hope one day we find our way back home..



        • Ernest Hemingway
          Books - Jane eyere. Alice in wonderland


        • The butterfly effect
          What dreams may come
          Serendipity
          Silver linings playbook
          The adjustment bureau
          Wreck it ralph
          Up


        • The music I'd make with Bryan..
          Chevelle
          Zeppelin
          Rise against
          Three days grace
          Death cab for cutie
          Muse
          Imagine dragons
          One republic
          Greenday
          Mayday parade
          Afi
          Spill canvas
          Luna halo
          Avenged sevenfold
          Ed sheeran
          John mayer
          Caged the elephant
          Flyleaf
          Fireflight
          Kutless
          Jars of clay
          Tool
          Frank sinatra
          Billy joel
          The black keys
          Evanescense
          Soooo much more


        • Boy meets world
          Scrubs
          Big bang theory
          How i met your mother
          Late night with Jimmy Fallon


        • Edgar allen poe


        • "This too shall pass"
          "To have been loved so deeply, even though the person that loved us is gone, will give us some protection forever" - j.k. rowling


        • Drawing
          Playing piano
          Writing lyrics
          Singing
          Volunteering at animal shelters


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      BarefootPoet   BarefootPoet wrote
      on 2/26/2015 7:47:56 AM
      Hi, I just read your poem, Lock Without a Key. It is well crafted. Could I make a suggestion to make it more powerful, give it more of a punch? If you remove the repeating words and stick to the meaty words (so to speak), they will show more of the emotions you are portraying. For example: I'm no longer whole Neither is he Locked out by pain Cannot find the key (Sadly wasn't a repeating word in this stanza but your entire poem speaks of sadness) I enjoyed reading your work this morning and hope to see more.

      SynystersWife   SynystersWife wrote
      on 1/25/2015 11:24:10 PM
      Hello there, I saw that you liked a lot of the same things I did and I was hoping we could be friend! I love your works, they are very good. Message me whenever you like, em, also hit me up on Wattpad.com if you ever decide to join it. Personally speaking, Wattpad is a little more fun and up beat than this site. Anyway, I wish you the best of luck on your writing. Love Avenged as well, Syn is a perfect babe! :)

      jesusfreak786   jesusfreak786 wrote
      on 1/11/2015 4:47:05 PM
      Hey! I like the writings you've posted =) And you're very beautiful =) You should post more!

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