Erased

Please don’t erase me

I’m only human.

With a plain white paper

In front of me, I write.

When I make a mistake,

I don’t erase it

Because I can’t.

I can’t erase my problems

But I can re-write them better.

Please don’t erase me!

I can’t be,

And neither can you!!


Comments:
 
angelsmiles   angelsmiles wrote
on 5/30/2011 5:25:31 PM
Very Clever! I like it a lot!

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 4/26/2011 6:34:32 PM
I was with you until the last 2 lines, which threw me off. "Maybe "Just let me be me" (skip to the next line) "And you be you" or "Just let me write my own story' (skip) "And you write yours" coould work. If my logic is off her, please let me know. Still, not bad work.

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