A thought. . .
A darkened heart is a like a candle that loses its wick
Shave enough of the melted dead wax off -
And you will find more wick -
More light -
More life.

Comments:
 
Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 6/3/2009 10:08:47 PM
very insightful piece.

Shadowofsatan666   Shadowofsatan666 wrote
on 6/3/2009 9:39:09 PM
Great metaphor

WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/3/2009 9:06:29 PM
very true:) Nice!

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