Something Better

It’s so lonely out here tonight

Our only friends are the stars

The streets get longer, just so empty

Reminding who we are

 

Sometimes you just get down so far

You just can’t climb back out

It’s okay to cry, okay to laugh

Okay to get mad

Okay to sing, okay to write

 

Take our faith

Take our pain

We can just let it go now

Take my love

My hate

I can let it go now

Cuz there’s something better

In this world to see

Something better to be

As long as it’s you and me

 

As the night turns to day

Just another chance to change the way

Sometimes it’s hard to see the writing on the wall

Sometimes it’s hard to see at all


Listen to the music at:
http://www.MySpace.com/JimWisneski


Comments:
 
Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 6/2/2009 7:25:31 PM
This is a good piece..continue writing and blessing the world with your gift.

Trenchtownrock   Trenchtownrock wrote
on 6/2/2009 7:25:24 PM
This is a good piece..continue writing and blessing the world with your gift.

WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/2/2009 6:49:06 AM
I visited your website. The corner fo my life: I think this is the best one from all of your music and the round n' round I like that too. I am fund of music as well and writing lyrics but not composing music. Every peice of the songs that I made I have a friend who compose the song.

WAN   WAN wrote
on 6/2/2009 6:34:27 AM
this is nice:)

JimWisneski
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I write because it's how I speak to the world.
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In case anyone didn't know, I write music. And lots of it. I have been blessed with the ability to write music on my guitar - and write some a great lyrics. Please note - I haven't been blessed with the greatest voice! I welcome ANY feedback, just not on my voice - I know it isn't great! :) All my music is at: http://www.myspace.com/jimwisneski The song I just posted is Something Better I will the lyrics for all my songs one by one. . . listen to the songs. . . read the lyrics. . . and enjoy life! Oh - just to give a quick background: these are all recorded on a basic 4 track - meaning I play the back up guitar part on 1 track. Then I sing on another. Then I play the lead guitar on a 3rd. Then I upload it to my computer and edit the best I can. It may not be perfect studio quality - but hey - it's music! Thanks! Jim
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