My Dearest One

 

 Why do you have to be so far away ? I
have found the one I love but you are
across the world.  When we talk you
seem so very close that I could almost
touch you I never want to let you go
but the call ends and I miss you as
if it had been months since the last time
we had talked.  Why do I feel like this?
We have never met but I know you so
well and you know me And yet we can not
meet.  The ocean is so vast and hard to
cross.  It must be a joke to the one who
placed us so far away from one another
I am alive again in my dreams for you are there
but when I wake I feel the loneliness once more
It would be so easy to live in my dreams
I miss you my dear one. You shall always
have my heart and all my love


Comments:
 
OneVoice   OneVoice wrote
on 1/4/2010 6:33:49 PM
It may be rare… but there are ‘sea creatures’ that travel great distances to continue the cycle of life. http://74.125.95.132/search?q=cache:S1xHGU4lAgcJ:www.awesomelibrary.org/Classroom/Science/Biology/Fish_and_Ocean_Creatures/Whales.html+creatures+that+travel+great+distances+to+mate&cd=9&hl=en&ct=clnk&gl=us. #14 ‘These mammals travel great distances to take advantage of the best breeding grounds and feeding spots.’ I do not suggest that you are a sea creature…; but all life (human and animal) share a DNA that compel them (for the most part) to behave according to their ‘nature’… so when you ask the question “Why do I feel like this?”… My response would be…, “To live, to connect, and to find love ‘drives us’ to seek whatever speaks to our ‘nature’ – to our souls.” We (as humans) spend a considerable amount of time learning how to destroy that perfect part of ourselves by ignoring our own hearts… giving more credence to the failed attempts of others… than to ourselves. Our actions have consequences. I would take ‘a distant love’ over a near friendship - any day.

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