PEACE
The air is still when you come near
The calmness I feel when you
are around is so surreal 
Background noises begin to fade
Nothing but peace...
your gentle voice soothes
away the hurts and despair

I had lost my way
but you found me once again
and hold me in your embrace
where I am safe and 
no longer afraid

1-19-12

Comments:
 
Rhiannon   Rhiannon wrote
on 5/15/2012 12:04:50 PM
Thank you Star :)

StarPoet   StarPoet wrote
on 5/14/2012 3:31:49 AM
You give peace a new meaning and perspective here. I agree with One Voice also. Well said!

Rhiannon   Rhiannon wrote
on 5/1/2012 4:30:00 AM
thank you :)

OneVoice   OneVoice wrote
on 4/28/2012 3:03:15 AM
Wonderfully conveyed

Rhiannon
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Anyone can make you smile or cry, but it takes someone special to
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