WILL YOU
What happened that I got so far off course? Will I ever find my way back to where I belong?
 My cries of distress go unheard in the midst of those around me. Can they not hear me?
Am I so far gone that they can not hear me. My pain screams from the depths of my soul
and yet they look as if Im not there. I can not go on like this anymore.
I need to find what was lost so long ago, but as time slips away I find it harder
and harder to remember where I need to be.There must be some clue to find my way.
Will I ever find it? Will they ever hear the pain in my voice or see the fear in my eyes?
Will you see me before you or when I am gone?

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Rhiannon   Rhiannon wrote
on 5/1/2012 4:28:49 AM
to be honest, this poem had nothing to do with love, it was written at a time when my world had crashed, and I had totally lost myself, and was trying to find me again. I do agree with what you said about the most deserving ones in our life

OneVoice   OneVoice wrote
on 4/28/2012 3:33:56 AM
Shouldn't it be... the one's who love us the most, be most deserving of our greatest affections/admiration/appreciations... rather than the ones WE love the most... who do not love/hear/appreciate us - as we them. Should we not set our affections on things above... not on things below. Your cries are heard... they may simply fail to exact a response/expression by those upon whom you've set your affections... yet, they are heard nevertheless. Maybe 'redirection' is a better reflection... but, who understands the way of love or the heart or ways of those who love. It's ways cannot be controlled.

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